Sunday, March 4, 2012

Can You Haiku? (Due Friday, March 9th)

For this post, you should write your own haiku!
(Read the information below for inspiration.  The only requirement is that your poem be a true haiku, with 5 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second, and 5 in the third!)

What is haiku?

Haiku is a Japanese poetry form. The best haiku uses just a few words to capture a moment and create a picture in the reader's mind. It is like a tiny window into a scene much larger than itself.
In English, haiku is normally written in three lines, with five syllables in the first line, seven syllables in the second line, and five syllables in the third line.

Haiku example
Here's a haiku poem written by a poetry student:

The last winter leaves
Clinging to the black branches
Explode into birds.


Characteristics of haiku
The following are typical of haiku:
  • A focus on nature.
  • A "season word" such as "snow" which tells the reader what time of year it is.
  • A division somewhere in the poem, which focuses first on one thing, then on another. The relationship between these two parts is sometimes surprising.
  • Instead of saying how a scene makes him or her feel, the poet shows the details that caused that emotion. If the sight of an empty winter sky made the poet feel lonely, describing that sky can give the same feeling to the reader.
This blog prompt was taken from the following website: 
http://www.creative-writing-now.com/how-to-write-a-haiku.html

10 comments:

  1. I am a hoos fan
    I bleed out blue and orange
    even if we are losing.

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  2. Summer is leaving
    The once clear sky is now grey
    The leaves have fallen.

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  3. Andrew, your last line should say "Even if we lose" to get the syllable count right. I like both topics! Well done, keep it up.

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  4. So many things there
    Poems filling up my mind
    No more space at all

    Lindsay Bonner

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    1. This poem hit home with me, I agree completely with what your trying to say. Sometimes I feel like all the poems and stories and facts and songs and tv shows and movies and tales and pictures and stories and oh wait i already said stories ummm books i guess make my brain feel stuffed. Sometimes I pretend i have a hole in my head and some of the stuff leaks out and that makes my head feel not as stuffed, you should try it, it will help. This poem, no you, really touched me. I aspire to be like you. Thank you Lindsay Boner.

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  5. Everybody fears the bear,
    all the people love the hare,
    but I don't really care.

    (Hare, as in the bunny!)

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  6. Sugar from the sky,
    Mixed in a bowl with syrup,
    My taste buds sing joy

    Jesse Higgins

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  7. In the microwave
    The sounds of pop pop pop pop
    it's so good yum yum

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  8. Mike Scott is the man,
    who is the best on the team.
    He scores many points per game.

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  9. I start my homework
    think "should be playing Xbox"
    ditch homework and play.
    Mckellar Cox

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